The homework for 31st July.
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : What would you do if your mobile phone gets lost and you are waiting for many important calls?
A : It can be differ from case by case.
If I know the phone number of the counterparts, I will call him by other phone.
However, If I don\'t know the phone number of the counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
Since many Koreans are using a message app like \"KAKAO TALK\", I will inform a message through PC version.
강사 첨삭
Hi Eddy,
As always, thank you for taking the time to answer this essay. :)
Your solution is very practical. Using the PC version of KakaoTalk is one of the best approaches in this situation.
Your solution is very practical. Using the PC version of KakaoTalk is one of the best approaches in this situation.
Thank you for your time tonight. Have a blast tomorrow! See you again on Monday, if you\'re not busy. :)
- Teacher Elly~
A : It can be differ from case by case.
If I know the phone number of the counterparts, I will call him by other phone.
>> If I know the phone number of my counterpart, I will call him/her using another phone.
Since many Koreans are using a message app like \"KAKAO TALK\", I will inform a message through PC version.
>> Since many Koreans use a messaging app like KakaoTalk, I will send a message through the PC version.
A : It can be differ from case by case.
>> It can differ case by case.
OR >> It can be different in each case.
If I know the phone number of the counterparts, I will call him by other phone.
>> If I know the phone number of my counterpart, I will call him/her using another phone.
OR >> If I know the phone number of my counterparts, I will call them using another phone.
However, If I don\'t know the phone number of the counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
>> However, if I don’t know the phone number of my counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
*Just a small grammar fix: lowercase \'if\'.
However, If I don\'t know the phone number of the counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
>> However, if I don’t know the phone number of my counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
*Just a small grammar fix: lowercase \'if\'.
Since many Koreans are using a message app like \"KAKAO TALK\", I will inform a message through PC version.
>> Since many Koreans use a messaging app like KakaoTalk, I will send a message through the PC version.
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