The homework for 4/5: essay

Hello Oh,

Sam.

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I easily feel tired and hard these day.

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It is too pity for me to become weak in physically.

>>It is a pity for me to become weak physically.
I think i am always young. haha

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See you tomorrow.

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Important person that I have looked up to and who has helped you in my life is my mother.

>>The important person that I\'ve looked up to and who have helped me in my life was my mother.
When she was at 19 years old, she got married and at 29 years old she was a widow.

>>When she was 19 years old, she got married and became a widow at the age of 29.

 From that time, She only raised me and my brothers as a widow until 59 years old, died by bus accident.

>>From that time, she raised me and my brothers alone until she died of a bus accident at the age of 59.
if there was no victim of my mother, i might not be exist now.
>>If she wasn\'t a victim of that terrible accident, she might still be alive.
and there are may persons i have look up to.

>>Furthermore, there are other people that I look up to.
Among foreign politicians, one is Lincoln because he lived for the people.

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Among local politicians one is King Sejong because he created a korean language for people.
>>Among local politicians, I also look up to King Sejong because he created our Korean language for the people.
Among foreign business men, one is Seve Jobs but i don\'t know in detail about him.

>>Among foreign businessmen, Steve Jobs is a person to look up to but I don\'t know anything about him in detail.
But There is no one among local business men because they have been doing all kinds of bad,unjustifiable,illegal and irregular actions just lik avoiding tax, hereditary wealth and uncountable misdeeds.

>>But I guess with our local businessmen, there is no one that I can look up to because they are known for doing bad, unjustifiable,illegal and irregular actions like tax evasion, unexplained wealth and uncountable misdeeds.