The homework for 4/8: filling in the blanks

2016-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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sam. It's thirty 5:30 pm. It was so busy that i can see your comments and homework. I will keep talking with you though i have slip in grammar and stumbling over speaking. i will go cherry blossom festival viewing with my wife at Yeido in Seoul, Yeido is a famous place in Seoul as world firework festival, cherry blossom festival and a financial hub in korea. IBM is here and i am also working, so it takes about 10 mins on foot to the place of festival. sam. please have a enough rest time at weekend! =body= 1. It was a so hot night that I couldn’t sleep. 2. You should have better discuss this with your manager. 3. She is __ friend. 4. I shouldn’t have invited him to my party. 5. This is the house which I was born. 6. The house in which I was born is a long way away. 7. I wasn’t impressed with all. 8. According to him, capitalism is evil. 9. She asked them if they would help her. 10. I don’t know why they are late.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh,

It nice for you to answer your homework today. I do encourage you to bank more vocabularies which could help you improve your skills in English. Have fun learning and enjoy the day ahead!

T.Jeny

 

sam.
>>correct
It\'s thirty 5:30 pm.

>>It\'s 5:30 pm.
It was so busy that i can see your comments and homework.

>>It was a busy day that\'s why I didn\'t see your comment and homework.
I will keep talking with you though i have slip in grammar and stumbling over speaking.

>>I will keep talking with you though I have slips in grammar and stumble over our conversation.

i will go cherry blossom festival viewing with my wife at Yeido in Seoul, Yeido is a famous place in Seoul as world firework festival, cherry blossom festival and a financial hub in korea.

>>I will go to the cherry blossom festival with my wife, in Yeido, Seoul, a famous place where the world\'s finest firework, cherry blossom festivals and financial hub in Korea are held.
IBM is here and i am also working, so it takes about 10 mins on foot to the place of festival.

>>IBM will participate in the event so I need to attend and work at the same time. It takes 10 mins., by foot going to the festival.
sam. please have a enough rest time at weekend!
>>Sam, please take enough rest this weekend.
=body=
1. It was a so hot night that I couldn’t sleep.

>> It was so hot a night that I couldn’t sleep.
2. You should have better discuss this with your manager.

>>You had better discuss this with your manager.
3. She is __ friend.

>>She is my best friend.
4. I shouldn’t have invited him to my party.

>>correct
5. This is the house which I was born.

>>This is the house where I was born.
6. The house in which I was born is a long way away.

>>correct
7. I wasn’t impressed with all.

>>I wasn’t impressed at all.
8. According to him, capitalism is evil.

>>correct
9. She asked them if they would help her.

>>correct
10. I don’t know why they are late.

>>correct

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