The homework for February 25th.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Eddy!
Your answer is clear, and I can see that you understand how the MZ Generation is viewed in Korea. It\'s great that you included examples like TV shows, YouTube, and social media; this makes your answer feel more real and relatable!
To make your response even stronger, you could add a personal opinion about the MZ Generation. Do you think they are changing society in a good way? What makes them unique? Adding your own thoughts will make your answer even more interesting.
You\'re improving a lot. Keep up the great work! Your ideas are strong, and with more practice, your writing will feel even more natural.
~Teacher Cathy
Yes. I heared about the MZ Generation frequently.
>>Yes, I hear about the MZ Generation frequently.
In Korea, many peoples use that word.
>>In Korea, many people use that word.
Many Koreans use the word MZ Generation on the Internet, TV show, Youtube, and SNS.
>>Many Koreans use the word \"MZ Generation\" on the Internet, TV shows, YouTube, and SNS.
Many korean youtubers are dealing the subject about the MZ Generation.
>>Many Korean YouTubers are dealing with the subject of the MZ Generation.
Like \"The daily life of the MZ worker\"
>>Like \"The daily life of an MZ worker\".
And i also called \"MZ Generation\" in Korea.
>>And I am also called an \"MZ Generation\" in Korea.
Yeah, i know i am not young boy.
>>Yeah, I know I am not a young boy.
However, the age range of the MZ Generation is very wide in Korea.
>>CORRECT
OR>>However, the MZ Generation in Korea has a broad age range.
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