The homework for March 4th.

2025-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

Q : Do you like reading books or watching movies more? Why? A : I like watching movies more than reading books. I like watching movie because it is more lively and i don`t need to move my fingers. I can just sit down on the chair and the movice show me the world of a director. Sometimes, reading books is more helpful for me because it make me more imaginative. However, since i am lazy boy, watching movies is more convinient for me.

강사 첨삭

Hello Eddy!

Your answer is fun and honest, which makes it really enjoyable to read!

I love how you pointed out that movies feel more lively and let you see the director\'s world. That’s a great way to describe it. It’s also nice that you recognize the value of books, even though you prefer movies. That balance in your answer makes it more interesting and thoughtful.

And don’t worry, many people feel the same way. Watching movies is so much easier and more relaxing than reading, especially after a long day. If you want to add more details, maybe you can mention your favorite movie or a movie that really inspired you.

I was looking forward to our class today, so it felt a little different without you. I always enjoy our discussions, and I’m excited to hear your thoughts next time. Keep up the great work, and see you tomorrow.

~Teacher Cathy

 

I like watching movies more than reading books. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>I prefer watching movies over reading books. 

I like watching movie because it is more lively and i don`t need to move my fingers. 

>>I like watching movies because they are more lively, and I don’t need to move my fingers. 

I can just sit down on the chair and the movice show me the world of a director. 

>>I can just sit down on the chair, and the movie shows me the world of a director. 

Sometimes, reading books is more helpful for me because it make me more imaginative. 

>>Sometimes, reading books is more helpful for me because it makes me more imaginative. 

However, since i am lazy boy, watching movies is more convinient for me. 

>>However, since I am a lazy boy, watching movies is more convenient for me. 

 

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