The homework for March 5th.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Eddy!
Happy Birthday! I hope you have a wonderful time celebrating with your family in your hometown. Enjoy the delicious food and special moments with your loved ones.
Your answer was really well-expressed, and I like how you shared both the excitement and challenges of online shopping. It’s great that you use personal experiences to support your opinion, it makes your response even more engaging.
Have a fantastic birthday weekend! I look forward to seeing you on Monday and hearing all about your celebration.
~Teacher Cathy
Yes. I have both positive and negative experiences when i used online shopping.
>>Yes, I have had both positive and negative experiences with online shopping.
Sometimes, i felt very excited because i received goods which are giving more satisfaction to me.
>>Sometimes, I felt very excited because I received goods that gave me great satisfaction.
However, sometimes i felt very unhappy when i received goods which are making me dissapointed.
>>However, sometimes I felt very unhappy when I received goods that made me disappointed.
Since i can`t measure actual size and color, i got a smaller or bigger clothes.
>>Since I can\'t accurately measure the actual size and color, I sometimes end up with clothes that are either too small or too big.
However, as online shopping is convinient, i like it and use it frequently.
>>However, since online shopping is convenient, I like it and use it frequently.
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