The homework of 10th Fab.
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Hello Eddy,
Thank you for taking the time to do your homework. I know you\'re busy with work, so I truly appreciate the effort you put into this. It makes me really happy to see you taking this step. I love how honest and thoughtful your response is. Your choice of words - Normal, Responsibility, and Peacefulness - paints a picture of someone who values balance, kindness, and personal integrity. Wanting to be \"normal\" shows that you find comfort in simplicity and don\'t seek unnecessary attention, but that doesn’t mean you aren’t special. Your sense of responsibility proves that you care deeply about others, always trying to do your best so that no one is negatively affected. And your love for peacefulness - whether it’s enjoying music, walking, or just lying in bed - reflects a heart that seeks harmony and quiet happiness in life. This is such a sincere and beautiful way to describe yourself. Keep embracing who you are, because these qualities will make you a strong, kind, and dependable person for those around you.
~Teacher Cathy
First, the word that can express me is \"Normal\".
>>CORRECT
OR>>The first word that best describes me is \"Normal.\"
Because i don`t want to get other people`s attention.
>>Because I don’t want to draw attention from others.
I just want to be a normal person.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I just want to be an ordinary person.
Second, the word \"Responsibility\".
>>CORRECT
OR>>The second word is \"Responsibility.\"
Because i don`t like to harm to the other people, i always try to my best for doing one portion.
>>Because I don\'t like to harm others, I always try my best to do my part.
Finaly, the word \"Peacefulness\".
>>Finally, the word \"Peacefulness.\"
I like laying on my bed and walking a street.
>>I enjoy lying on my bed and walking down the street.
Also, i like listening a music at that moment. I don`t like fight, blame.
>>I also enjoy listening to music during those moments. I don\'t like fighting or blaming others.
Just wanna peace.
>>I just want peace.
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