The homework of 12th Fab.
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Hello Eddy,
Thank you for your homework! I really appreciate how you’ve approached this question with a balance of caution and practicality.
You did a great job explaining that GMOs can be useful, especially in a world where resources are limited. It’s clear that you’re thinking about the bigger picture, which is really important.
I also like how you mentioned the need for caution and the fact that we don’t yet fully understand the potential long-term effects of GMOs. That’s a very thoughtful approach, especially when talking to a younger person.
To make your explanation even clearer, you could maybe add a simple example of how GMOs help, like how they can make crops more resistant to pests or grow in harsher environments. This could help a middle schooler better grasp why GMOs can be useful, while still understanding the need for caution.
Overall, great job! Your answer is well thought out, and I’m proud of how you explained it simply but thoroughly. Keep it up!
~Teacher Cathy
I`ll tell child that Due to resources is limited, GMO can be good resources for human.
>>I\'ll tell the child that since resources are limited, GMOs can be a good option for humans.
However, at the same time, i will tell him don`t trust GMO 100%.
>>However, at the same time, I will also tell them not to trust GMOs 100%.
Because the bad effect of GMO is not studied much yet.
>>This is because their negative effects have not been studied much yet.
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