The homework of 16th Jan.
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: What are the best ways to make a good first impression?
A : In my opinion, a good first impression can be made by smiling always. In the Korean old saying, \"You can\'t spit to the smiling face\". This sentence explains what I said.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! I agree. It’s often the first thing people notice, and it can leave a lasting impression, even if the conversation is brief.
-T. Sonny
In my opinion, a good first impression can be made by smiling always. >>In my opinion, a good first impression can be made by always smiling.
In the Korean old saying, \"You can\'t spit to the smiling face\".
>>There\'s an old Korean proverb that goes, \'You can\'t spit in a smiling face.\'
This sentence explains what I said.
>>Correct!
OR. This explains my point further.
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