The homework of 16th Jan.
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: When was the last time you thought you did your best but realized you could do better?
A : It was the time when i had a test called TOEIC.
TOEIC is a english test in the Korea.
I got a score 850 at 3 years ago.
The total score of TOEIC is 990.
When i got that score, i thought i did my best at that time.
However, as i learning English by video call now, i think i could get a better score if i got a video call study earlier.
I am learning many things from you. Thank you always.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]! Your TOEIC score is impressive. Also, I appreciate your kind words. Thank you for doing your best and actively participating in class. Your dedication is inspiring.
-T. Sonny
It was the time when i had a test called TOEIC.>>It was the time when I had a test called TOEIC.
TOEIC is a english test in the Korea.
>>TOEIC is an English test in Korea.
I got a score 850 at 3 years ago.
>>I got a score of 850 three years ago.
The total score of TOEIC is 990.
>>Correct!
When i got that score, i thought i did my best at that time.
>>When I got that score, I thought I did my best that time.
However, as i learning English by video call now, i think i could get a better score if i got a video call study earlier.
>>However, as I learn English through video classes, I think I could have gotten a better score if I had done this before.
I am learning many things from you.
I am learning many things from you.
>>Correct!
Thank you always.
>>Much appreciated, always.
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