The horror school

2012-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

학생이 쓴 원문

Alice, Hi~ This is [Name]! Today was a Halloween day! I take a candy when I come to home. so I sayed "tric or treat", and I gave candies my friends, and we prepare for Halloween day. Many frends take on the horror clothes. I draw on face zombie picture and I take on the zombie clothe. and I sayed " tric or treat" and I ate candies, and we surpised students and teachers. So Ms.Lee was very scared because she doesn't give candies, so we triced for Ms.Lee. she was panic. Today was a funny days and the best day in the year.

강사 첨삭

Happy Halloween Daniel! Trick or treats! Can I also have some candies? Hahaha! You really enjoyed this day. I wish I saw you in that zombie costume. Did you look scary? ^^ Anyway, thanks for sending this over. :) Kindly check the corrections I have for you below. Have a spooky night Daniel! ~ ~ Teacher Alice ~ ~ Alice, Hi~ This is [Name]! >> Hi Alice. This is [Name]!Today was a Halloween day! >> It was Halloween day today! >> OR Today, we celebrated Halloween!I take a candy when I come to home. so I sayed \"tric or treat\", >> I played \"tricks or treats\" and I have taken some candies when I got home.and I gave candies my friends, and we prepare for Halloween day. >> I also gave candies to my friends and we prepared for halloween.Many frends take on the horror clothes. >> My friends wore Halloween clothes.I draw on face zombie picture and I take on the zombie clothe. >> I put zombie make up on my face and I have worn zombie costume.and I sayed \" tric or treat\" and I ate candies, and we surpised students and teachers. >> I said \"Trick or treats \" and I was given candies. We surprised the students and teachers. So Ms.Lee was very scared because she doesn\'t give candies, so we triced for Ms.Lee.she was panic. >> Ms. [Name] was very scared because she didn\'t give candies so we tricked her and she panicked. Today was a funny days and the best day in the year. >> Today was fun and it\'s the best day of the year.

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