the host gave us special dinner which is korean food called "Galbie zzim".

2013-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1. This __ be dangerous if you don't have the right equipment. can 2. You __ yell at your parents. It's not nice. shouldn't 3. P1: Isn't that Charlie's umbrella? P2: Yes, he __ have left it here yesterday. must 4. __ I borrow your pen for a minute? Can 5. It's late. I __ get going. should 6. I saw that pen this morning. It __ be around here somewhere. must 7. I __ understand what he's saying. can't 11.1.5 At evening, the host gave us special dinner which is korean food called "Galbie zzim". she was a good cook. we really enjoyed the meal. after that, she gathered us and talked to us that " I really happy to meet you. and she wanted us to write our pass port number and our names. Writing pass port number was the first time for us while in travelling but we thought it was nothing. when in night time, she told us she had to go other building to sleep and said that "In the morning, I want to treat you meals so don't lock the door."

강사 첨삭

Hello there! I do hope that you had an enjoyable holiday. Thank you for doing your homework and for sharing your experiences. Let\'s talk more about it in class. ^^, Anyway, please go over the corrections. See you! ~T. Nina~   1. This __ be dangerous if you don\'t have the right equipment. can >> Correct! >> This can be dangerous if you don\'t have the right equipment.  2. You __ yell at your parents. It\'s not nice. shouldn\'t >> Correct! >>  You shouldn\'t yell at your parents. It\'s not nice. 3. P1: Isn\'t that Charlie\'s umbrella? P2: Yes, he __ have left it here yesterday. must >> Correct! >>  P1: Isn\'t that Charlie\'s umbrella? P2: Yes, he must have left it here yesterday.  4. __ I borrow your pen for a minute? Can >> Correct! >> Can  I borrow your pen for a minute? 5. It\'s late. I __ get going. should >> Correct! >> It\'s late. I should get going.  6. I saw that pen this morning. It __ be around here somewhere. must >> Correct! >> I saw that pen this morning. It must be around here somewhere.  7. I __ understand what he\'s saying. can\'t >> Correct! >> I can\'t understand what he\'s saying.  11.1.5 At evening, the host gave us special dinner which is korean food called \"Galbie zzim\". >> In the evening,  the host served us a special dinner which is a Korean food called \"Galbie zzim\". she was a good cook. >> She is a good cook. we really enjoyed the meal. >>  We really enjoyed the meal. after that, she gathered us and talked to us that \" I really happy to meet you. >>  After that, she gathered us and talked to us. She said, \" I am really happy to meet you.\" OR>>  After that, she gathered us and talked to us. She told us that she is really happy to meet us.  and she wanted us to write our pass port number and our names. >> She also wanted us to write our passport numbers and our names. Writing pass port number was the first time for us while in travelling but we thought it was nothing. >> That was the first time that we wrote our passport numbers while travelling. We thought that it was nothing. when in night time, she told us she had to go other building to sleep and said that \"In the morning, I want to treat you meals so don\'t lock the door.\" >> During the night, she told us that she has to go to the other building to sleep. She also said,  \"In the morning, I want to treat you to a good meal so don\'t lock the door.\"

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