the Ideal weekend

2012-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

Due to the hard working on week days, I want do something else on weekends. I think the weekend is the time making my life be balanced. So, during weekend, I sleep longer than usual, It means that I ge up late. I love spending time in bad especially in the morning with my children by reading books or talking. if I want to feel the fresh air, I would ride a bike alone or go camping with my family. I think the ideal weekend is on happiness. If he feels happy on weekends and looks for next weekend, I can guess that he has the ideal weekend.

강사 첨삭

Wonderful morning to you, [이름]! I think your ideal weekend is very relaxing. I know that you have a well-balanced lifestyle that\'s why I\'m also trying to my best to be like you when it comes to that matter.  In my opinion, ideal weekends are basically the time where you spend it with your loved ones or when you feel that you are relaxed and happy wherever you may be or whatever you might be doing. Thank you so much for finding time finishing this homework. I\'ll be talking with you again in class tomorrow. Take care! Due to the hard working on week days, I want do something else on weekends. >>Due to working hard on weekdays, I want to do something else on the weekends.I think the weekend is the time making my life be balanced. >>I think weekends is the time where I can balance my life.So, during weekend, I sleep longer than usual, It means that I ge up late. >>During the weekends, I sleep longer than the usual. I get up late.I love spending time in bad especially in the morning with my children by reading books or talking. >> I love spending time on the bed especially in the morning with my children while reading books or just talking.if I want to feel the fresh air, I would ride a bike alone or go camping with my family. >>If I want to smell the fresh air, I would ride a bike alone or go camping with my family.I think the ideal weekend is on happiness. >>I think an ideal weekend is based on happiness. If he feels happy on weekends and looks for next weekend, I can guess that he has the ideal weekend. >>If a person feels happy and looks forward to the next weekend, I guess that person has an ideal weekend.

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