The image of tourism
학생이 쓴 원문
Tourism seems to have different images depending on people. For me, it\'s free and relaxing. But sometimes it is walking for several hours and somewhat tiredness. And it\'s a kind of adventure or challenging myself.
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Take care and have a good day as well.
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T. Jeny
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For me, it\'s free and relaxing.
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But sometimes it is walking for several hours and somewhat tiredness.
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And it\'s a kind of adventure or challenging myself.
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