the importance of effective communication

2023-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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First of all, effective communication can be achieved when I understand partner\'s intention exactly and accomplish goal by delivering my desire. For this, it is needed to be informed the related reports and to identify situation by contacting the person in charge before the official meeting starts. If I\'m ready to communicate in this way, I can figure out the problem fastly with prepared words and files. Therefore, I can get a reputation, such as a professional person who handles complicated works efficiently.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Yu [이름]!

Your hard work will surely pay off!

-Hanna ^^

First of all, effective communication can be achieved when I understand partner\'s intention exactly and accomplish goal by delivering my desire.

>>First of all, effective communication is achieved when I accurately understand my partner\'s intentions and successfully accomplish goals by conveying my desires.
For this, it is needed to be informed the related reports and to identify situation by contacting the person in charge before the official meeting starts.

>>To achieve this, it is crucial to be informed about related reports and to identify the situation by contacting the person in charge before the official meeting begins. 
If I\'m ready to communicate in this way, I can figure out the problem fastly with prepared words and files.

>>By communicating in this prepared manner, I can promptly address problems with well-thought-out words and files.
Therefore, I can get a reputation, such as a professional person who handles complicated works efficiently.

>>Therefore, I can cultivate a reputation as a professional who efficiently handles complicated tasks.

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