The Importance of family support
학생이 쓴 원문
I think we should give priority to supporting the family.
Studying can be done while supporting the family, but while we have family supporting, we can not go to school.
People are more important than studying.
강사 첨삭
This is true, Ms. [이름]!
I guess we should know more about our priority first, because we people are in different situations in life. Hats off to you!
~Teacher Eunice
I think we should give priority to supporting the family.
>>> I think we should give priority for supporting the family.
Studying can be done while supporting the family, but while we have family supporting, we can not go to school.
>>> Studying can be done while supporting the family, but while we are supporting our family, we can not go to school.
People are more important than studying.
>>> Correct!
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