The importance of having a vacation
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Vacation and free time is same meaning.
Everyone love a vacation and no one loves work.
Also, the vacation would provide relax of mind to us.
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Vacation and free time is same meaning.
>> For me, having free time is the same as having a vacation.
Everyone love a vacation and no one loves work.
>> Everyone loves vacation and no one loves work.
Also, the vacation would provide relax of mind to us.
Also, the vacation would provide relax of mind to us.
>> Also, going on a vacation would help us relax our minds.
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