The importance of regularly studying
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The importance of studying regularly.
I saw a sign of 2019 on the computer screen.
>>I saw the year 2019 written on the computer screen.
I have looked forward to meet 2019 since 2017 when I started military services.
>>I have looked forward to stepping into 2019 since 2017, when I started my military service.
In retrospects, There were many kinds of things can\'t be counted.
>>In retrospect, there were so many kinds of things that happened, which can’t be counted anymore.
or>>In retrospect, I have encountered so many kinds of things that I lost count of them all.
Sometimes I was fall down in rumor that my superiors made.
>>There were times, I was involved in a false rumor that my superiors have made.
In this time, I was disturbed and feel like that I destroyed the army and fire the rest of them.
>>At this time, I was mentally disturbed and so I felt like destroying the army and start firing at them all.
But I must endure all of them and express \"fine\",the diverse expression of real thing.
>>But I must endure them all and respond to their greetings with the word \"fine\", which is the exact opposite of my real feelings.
Even until now, It makes me crazy to think the fucking superiors driving me embarrassed.
>>Even until now, it makes me go crazy to think that the freaking superiors are driving me nuts by constantly embarrassing me.
I want for them to go to hell.
>>I want all of them to go to hell.
Furthermore, there are bosses driving me crazy.
>>Furthermore, there are bosses that are driving me crazy.
The bosses do nothing to me these days, but during the second half of 2018, they said to me some kinds of things that never be done to any people.
>>The bosses have stopped doing such things to me these days, but during the second half of 2018, they said some unutterable kinds of things to me, which have never been done to anyone before.
They ruined my mentality which let me lethargic.
>>They’ve ruined me mentally, which left me feeling lethargic.
If the god gives to me the chance not to go jail even for murder, I absolutely kill all of them.
>>If God gives me a chance not to go to jail even for murder, I will absolutely kill them all.
They are evils came from hell and have a talent driving people crazy.
>>They are all evil incarnate from hell and they have a talent in driving people crazy.
Please GO TO HELL GUYS!
CORRECT SENTENCE!
or>>I wish you will suffer more than I did.
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