The importance of salary in choosing a job
학생이 쓴 원문
Salary is very important. I think the beginning of the company\'s welfare begins with salary. But I don\'t prefer to get paid a lot unconditionally. Because I think the hard work and the salary are proportional.
강사 첨삭
Hello King. Thank you for this.
>>> correct
I think the beginning of the company\'s welfare begins with salary.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I think the beginning of the company\'s welfare begins with the salary.
But I don\'t prefer to get paid a lot unconditionally. Because I think the hard work and the salary are proportional.
>>> OR: But I don\'t prefer to get paid a lot unconditionally, because I think the hard work and the salary go hand in hand.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.