The importance of understanding the other party, listers, and customers.
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My wife complained that the speech she heard from her Catholic Confirmation class made her annoyed and distracted. The speaker was so indulged in her spiritual experience and emotion, that she just speak up like zealot. Most of young students were in nap during the speech, so Fr. Ahn scolded them and got them out of the church.
I don't like that kind of one-sided dogmatic religious speech. I might be accustomed to Fr. Lee's philosophy that human life should be the first rather than religion, and religions come from human needs, in fact.
Jesus said, only people who like children would be able to enter into the heaven. What's wrong with middle school studnets and my wife who are very naive in Catholic?
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A lovely Monday night to you!
I hope you had enjoyed your weekend.
I can see that you are a very understanding person.
I wish that we can discuss more of our views in our class.
See you soon.
--T. Kelly
My wife complained that the speech she heard from her Catholic Confirmation class made her annoyed and distracted.
>> CORRECT!
The speaker was so indulged in her spiritual experience and emotion, that she just speak up like zealot.
>> The speaker was so indulged in her spiritual experience and emotion, that she just speak up like a zealot.
Most of young students were in nap during the speech, so Fr. Ahn scolded them and got them out of the church.
>> Most of the young students were napping during the speech, so Fr. Ahn scolded them and got them out of the church.
I don\'t like that kind of one-sided dogmatic religious speech.
>> CORRECT!
I might be accustomed to Fr. Lee\'s philosophy that human life should be the first rather than religion, and religions come from human needs, in fact.
>> I might be accustomed to Fr. Lee\'s philosophy that human life should be the first priority, rather than religion, and religions came from human needs.
Jesus said, only people who like children would be able to enter into the heaven.
>> CORRECT!
What\'s wrong with middle school studnets and my wife who are very naive in Catholic?
>> What\'s wrong with middle school students and my wife who are very naive with the Catholic church?
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