The important thing when buying something
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think the price is the most important thing when buying something. I first consider my need for the items and the quality of the items.
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Good afternoon to you Sir [이름]! You have a very engaging writing style which
allows you to write short ideas with clarity
and sophistication. Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I don\'t think the price is that the most important thing when buying something.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>>I believe that the price is not necessarily the most crucial factor when making a purchase.
I first consider my need for the items and the quality of the items.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> I evaluate both my necessity for the items and the standard of their quality.
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