the important time
학생이 쓴 원문
time is so important
for example \"be more precious than gold\".
there is an old saying that.
and people make timetable.
because they know time is very invaluable.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]. I am so happy to receive your homework. I made some necessary corrections to it so next time, try to use capital letters and punctuation marks when necessary.^^ I believe Time is invaluable and we can never take back the time we lost so let us take advantage of every moment. As the saying goes, \"Carpe Diem\" which means \"seize the day,\" let\'s enjoy every moment on the weekend. So have a worthwhile and productive weekend. See you on Monday. ~ Teacher Jane c\",)
time is so important
>>> Time is so important.
for example \"be more precious than gold\".
>>> For example, \"It is more precious than gold.\"
there is an old saying that.
>>> That is an old saying.
and people make timetable. because they know time is very invaluable.
>>> Some people make a timetable because they know time is very invaluable.
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