The importantance of greeting
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Hi, Thomas! Thank you for this. I am sure that you will do very well in English if you continue to do good work as you have been doing.
-Teacher Joy
There are several reasons why greeting is important.
>> There
are several reasons why greetings are important.
First, you can leave a good first impression if you deliver a greeting with
smile and politely.
>> First, you can leave a good first impression if you deliver a greeting with a smile and politeness.
It is takes a lot of effort to change the initial
impression.
>> It
takes a lot of effort to change the initial impression.
Secondly, as the proverb says \'Nice word for nice word\', you can be easy to have a conversation with other people softly.
>> Secondly, as the proverb says, \'Nice word for nice word,\' you can easily have a conversation with other people softly.
Especially in the office, you can easily get their
cooperation.
>> Correct
Finally, It is the best way to make a good relationship.
>> Finally, it is the best way to build a good relationship.
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