The impressive country I think.
학생이 쓴 원문
I lately saw British drama, "Sherlock".
Throughout the drama, I got in British accent and antique London city.
As I hear, it's always cloudy day in London.
However I liked it, also I thought British accent is very charming.
If my speaking skill improves better than now, definitely I'll practice speaking British accent.
These, then, are the reasons I like my most impressive country, U.K.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Accent is truly a part of language that brings charm to speaking.^^
Do not worry, once you have mastered speaking in English, accents are easy enough.
Be motivated to always speak and of course expressing yourself.
Use the proper articles [이름]^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you today:
I lately saw British drama, \"Sherlock\".
>> I lately saw the British drama, \"Sherlock\".Throughout the drama, I got in British accent and antique London city.
>> Throughout the drama, I got into the British accent and the antique London city. As I hear, it\'s always cloudy day in London.
>> As I hear, it\'s always a cloudy day in London.However I liked it, also I thought British accent is very charming.
>> Yet. I got fond of it and I think British accent has a charm.If my speaking skill improves better than now, definitely I\'ll practice speaking British accent.
>> CORRECT
OR> If I get better in speaking English, I will also acquire skills in speaking with the British accent.These, then, are the reasons I like my most impressive country, U.K.
>> These then, are the reasons I like mostly like the impressive country, U.K.
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