The influence of books.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. Books can change the world for better or for worse. For example, when a book called Harry Potter came out, people went crazy and the world changed to people who loved Harry Potter. The author\'s own world must have changed the most. I don\'t know exactly why books changed the world, but one thing is certain books are something people can go crazy with.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Yes. Books can change the world for better or for worse.
>>> CORRECT!
For example, when a book called Harry Potter came out, people went crazy and the world changed to people who loved Harry Potter.
>>> For example, when a book called Harry Potter came out, people went crazy and the world changed people to love Harry Potter.
The author\'s own world must have changed the most.
>>> CORRECT!
I don\'t know exactly why books changed the world, but one thing is certain books are something people can go crazy with.
>>> I don\'t exactly know why books changed the world, but one thing is certain books are something people can go crazy about.
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