The inpection tour

2016-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

When I started my work. My team paid a lot of attention and was alert. The installment of the engineer asked me why you are working a little bit different compare to normal day. I replied, “Sorry, We got the intelligence from the head office, The audit team will visit our office to check our work disciple. So, We have to apply the rule for the installment of the elevator severly. Please understand our status” During the inspection for the new elevator. I found some mistakes they have to handle. That was the minor mistakes. If the audit team would not visit, I might give them the pass. But I had to be careful. So, I said to them. “Ok, I won’t give you the failure. But I am going to postpone getting approval from my boss. So, You have to handle your mistakes until 5pm and send me the pictures for the handling of mistakes. And then I will give you the pass after receiving pictures from you and get approval form my boss”

강사 첨삭

When I started my work. My team paid a lot of attention and was alert. >> When I started my work my team paid a lot of attention to details and was alert.The installment of the engineer asked me why you are working a little bit different compare to normal day. >> The installment engineer asked me why are we working a little different compared to a normal day. OR >> The installment engineer said: \"Why are you working a bit different compared to a normal day?\' I replied, “Sorry, We got the intelligence from the head office, The audit team will visit our office to check our work disciple. So, We have to apply the rule for the installment of the elevator severly. Please understand our status” >> I replied, “Sorry, we got an intelligence report from the head office informing us that the audit team will visit our office to check our performance. So, we have to strictly apply the rule for the installment of the elevator. Please understand our situation.”During the inspection for the new elevator. I found some mistakes they have to handle. >> During the inspection for the new elevator, I found some mistakes that they had to handle. That was the minor mistakes. >> Those were minor mistakes. If the audit team would not visit, I might give them the pass. >> If the audit team would not visit, I might give them a pass. But I had to be careful. >> CORRECT! OR >> I had to be careful. So, I said to them. “Ok, I won’t give you the failure. But I am going to postpone getting approval from my boss. So, You have to handle your mistakes until 5pm and send me the pictures for the handling of mistakes. And then I will give you the pass after receiving pictures from you and get approval form my boss” >> So, I said to them: Ok, I won’t give fail you. But I am going to postpone getting approval from my boss. You have to handle your mistakes until 5pm and send me the pictures that you did fix the mistakes. And then I will give you the pass after receiving the pictures / documentation from you and get approval from my boss.\"

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