The inspectation tour

2016-03-21 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Good morning teacher charry. I hope you that God bless you more. I posted my assay about my daily life. I tried to express what I have experienced in my work field. Some words are technical terms. So I am not sure wether I translate right or not. Thank for your full understanding for my poor writing.^^ Sincere Adrino My boss in the office called for the staff meeting to let us know something. He said that he got the intelligence from head office. The intelligence that he got from head office was that the department of elevator in government will visit our field sector to check our work discipline secretly. So, He asked us to be careful and be a alert. Especially, during the inspection for the new elevator. He said to us. We should put every safety gear written in the manual such as a safety shoes and a safety helmet. Actually, when we do the inspection for the new elevator. we don’t used to put on the safety gears written in the manuals because of the uncomfortable

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Hello there Mr. [Name]! ^^ Thank you very much for writing in our composition board and for sharing something about your field of work. To be honest, I understand how you feel. As an emergency nurse who always encounter unfamiliar patients, I have to wear multiple safety gears. And more often than not, they are really uncomfortable to use. Believe it or not, I often complain about it because sometimes, they get in the way. There are times when the safety gears that they provide are too tight or too loose to fit me. But even though I encounter these problems half the time, I also know that these safety gears could actually help me avoid contracting diseases from my patients. In my mind, I would say, \'I\'d rather use these uncomfortable safety gears rather than die from an unknown disease\". Haha! ^^ In the end, it\'s really just a matter of perspective. I hope you are having a wonderful day Mr. [Name]. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. ~Teacher Charry (^__^) Good morning teacher charry. >> Good morning Teacher charry.I hope you that God bless you more. >> I hope that God blesses you more. I posted my assay about my daily life. >> I posted my essay about my daily life.I tried to express what I have experienced in my work field. >> CORRECT! OR >> I tried to share what I have experienced in my field of work. Some words are technical terms. >> CORRECT! OR >> Some of the words are technical terms. So I am not sure wether I translate right or not. >> So I am not sure wether I translated the words right or not.Thank for your full understanding for my poor writing.^^ >> Thank for your full understanding of my poor writing.^^Sincere Adrino >> Sincerely, Adriano.My boss in the office called for the staff meeting to let us know something. >> My boss in the office called for a staff meeting to let us know about something.He said that he got the intelligence from head office. >> He said that he got an intelligence report from the head office.The intelligence that he got from head office was that the department of elevator in government will visit our field sector to check our work discipline secretly. >> The intelligence report that he got from the head office was that, the department of elevator management in our government will visit our  sector to secretly check on our quality of work and performance.So, He asked us to be careful and be a alert. Especially, during the inspection for the new elevator. >> So, He asked us to be careful and be alert especially during the inspection of the new elevators.He said to us. We should put every safety gear written in the manual such as a safety shoes and a safety helmet. >> He said we should put on every safety gear written in the manual such as safety shoes and safety helmet.Actually, when we do the inspection for the new elevator. we don’t used to put on the safety gears written in the manuals because of the uncomfortable >> Actually, when we do the inspection for a new elevator, we don’t usually use the safety gears written in the manuals because they are uncomfortable to use.

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