The internet
학생이 쓴 원문
I use the Internet for both fun and education. The Internet can provide a lot of stuffs which can help me study more about what I want to know. I mean it’s literally a lot. So I have to choose among them. That is the hardest part of studying through the internet. If I search on the Internet, there are numerous information which is related with what i want to know. I can’t handle by myself because it’s too much. But if i find the right thing, it will work and i can study further than i expect. Also the Internet can give me many fun stuffs like games, videos, and cartoons. So i use the Internet for fun if I have free time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. The internet indeed is a very useful tool if we know how to utilize it properly.
- T. Beth
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I use the Internet for both fun and education. >>> correct
The Internet can provide a lot of stuffs which can help me study more about what I want to know.
>>> correct
I mean it’s literally a lot.
>>> I mean, there\'s literally a lot.
So I have to choose among them.
>>> correct
That is the hardest part of studying through the internet.
>>> correct
If I search on the Internet, there are numerous information which is related with what I want to know.
>>> correct
I can’t handle by myself because it’s too much.
>>> OR: I can’t handle all of it by myself because it’s too much.
But if i find the right thing, it will work and i can study further than i expect.
>>> But if I find the right thing, it will work and I can study further than I have expected.
Also the Internet can give me many fun stuffs like games, videos, and cartoons.
>>> OR: The internet could also give me many fun stuffs like games, videos, and cartoons.
So I use the Internet for fun if I have free time.
>>> correct
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