The Internet has done more harm than good.
학생이 쓴 원문
disagree. Because the internet gives us a lot of information. However, overuse can be harmful.
-To teacher rosie
I\'m sorry. I go to my relatives\' house today. I\'ll see you on Monday. Have a good weekend♡
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework.
Don\'t worry abut it! Have fun with your relatives ♥
disagree. Because the internet gives us a lot of information. However, overuse can be harmful.
>> I disagree because the internet gives us a lot of information. However, overusing it can be harmful.
-To teacher rosie
>> To Teacher Rosie
I\'m sorry. I go to my relatives\' house today. I\'ll see you on Monday. Have a good weekend♡
>> I\'m sorry. I went to my relatives\' house today. I\'ll see you on Monday. Have a good weekend ♡
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