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I ordered the stuff on the internet on Tuesday. But until now I can't recieve mine. Usually the items are delivered in two or thress days. So I was a little angry and called the custom serviece. They said it could be delayed because of thanks given Thanks giving day is september 29. It is still far from today.
I ordered the cosmetic which is what I really want to get. So I waited for it for a long time. But I think I couldn't recieve it today, nethier.
Honestly the customer servieces were not falt. But at that time I was so disappointed about the delay. So I did over agnry. On the other side I still get angry that I can't get my stuff today. because another stuff which I ordered yesterday alread recieved. But cosmetic is more important than another to me.
Maybe tomorrow I can receive it... I hope that. I am thinking my cosmetice in this moment..
Am I so funny? zzz
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Hi there! Oh, that is so annoying! I understand you completely. Although that happens at times. So we just need to be more patient and understanding. ^^ Right? Hopefully you will be getting the item already by tomorrow. Let me know okay? Hehe ^^ Happy weekend! ^^
~T.Lara
I ordered the stuff on the internet on Tuesday.
>>I ordered the stuff on the internet last Tuesday.
But until now I can\'t recieve mine.
>>Although I didn\'t receive mine until now.
Usually the items are delivered in two or three days.
>> Usually the items are delivered within two to three days.
So I was a little angry and called the custom serviece.
>>So I was a little bit angry and called the customer service.
They said it could be delayed because of thanks given
>>They said that there might be a delay becasue of the Thanksgiving Day.
Thanks giving day is september 29. It is still far from today.
>>The Thanksgiving Day is on September 29 and it is very far from today.I ordered the cosmetic which is what I really want to get.
>>I ordered the cosmetic which I really want to have.
So I waited for it for a long time.
>>I waited for it for a long time.
But I think I couldn\'t recieve it today, nethier.
>>But I think I couldn\'t receive it today neither.Honestly the customer servieces were not falt. But at that time I was so disappointed about the delay.
>>Honestly, it is not the customer service representative\'s fault but that time I was so disappointed about the delay.
So I did over agnry.
>>I over reacted and was so angry.
On the other side I still get angry that I can\'t get my stuff today.
>>On the other hand, I am still angry since I won\'t get my stuff today.
because another stuff which I ordered yesterday alread recieved.
>>I already recieved the item that I ordered yesterday.
But cosmetic is more important than another to me.
>>The cosmetic is more important that the other one.Maybe tomorrow I can receive it... I hope that.
>>Maybe I will receive it by tomorrow and I am hoping for that.
I am thinking my cosmetice in this moment..
>>I am thinking about the cosmetics at the moment.Am I so funny? zzz
>>CORRECT
>>OR: Am I funny?
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