The island of Nam I
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The island in Chucheon city, Gangwon-do, River island in the North River called iNam I island.
>>> Nam I island is located in Chucheon City, Gangwon-do. It is a river island located in North river.
There are many cherry blossom now.
>>> There are many cherry blossom trees now.
It is famous for villas and swimming pools and The location of the \"winter sonata\"
>>> It is famous for villas, swimming pools and it is where they shoot the \"Winter Sonata\".
Do you know this drama?
>>> CORRECT!
The drama starring Bae yong jun, Choi ji woo, korean actors.
>>> The Korean actors starring in this drama are Bae Yong Jun and Choi Ji Won.
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