The issue of global warming
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There are a lot of chaging on earth by the global warming.
>> There are a lot of changes on Earth caused by Global warming.
So, many polar bears are suffering from hunger in pole.
>> So, many polar bears are suffering from hunger in the North and South pole.
Not only the bears, but also all kind of animals are also afflicted with the changed weather.
>> Correct
Now I can also feel the changed weather in Korea.
>> Now I can also feel the change of weather in Korea.
Basically banana is a kind of trofical fruit which have grown in warm place such as Tailand.
>> Basically, banana is a tropical fruit which is only grown in warm places such as Thailand.
However, banana have beared the fruit in korea this year. In my opinion, It is a big changing.
>> However, we have grown bananas in Korea this year. In my opinion, It is a big change.
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