The job I would like to have ten years from now

Currently I am working at a special school as a special education teacher. But in a decase, I would like to work in a different field. I am thinking of being a Korean teacher as I have been interested in teaching Korean to foreigners ever since I was young. So, I spend most of time studying English. It has been 6 months now, squeezing studying english in and strugging to improve my English skills. I believe being good at English will be a great help in my career because I hope to be a successful Korean teacher who teaches foreigners from all over the world. So I believe having good comminication skills based on English is essential to running my own Korean language class in the future.

Good evening [이름] Hee. Thank you for taking the time to share your opinion about this topic. I can see that you don\'t have any problem using transition words. That\'s great. I helps with fluency when you use the right transition to move from one sentence to the next. Most of your sentences are almost correct. I have just added some words to make the message clearer. ^_^