the journey to swiss was boring
학생이 쓴 원문
1. There are 10 houses on our street. Our house is the biggest one.
2. My brother sings better than I do, but I play guitar better than he does.
3. This is the best song I have ever heard!
4. Tom is stronger than I am.
5. Out of all the students in our class, I am the shortest.
6. Everyone says that my sister is better looking than I am.
7. She is the best looking girl in our school.
8. This is boring. Let's do something more interesting.
9. This isn't the most interesting book I have ever read.
10. Your apartment is cleaner than mine.
11.1.4
the itinerary to swiss was interesting, but the journey to swiss was boring.
it's true, I recommend you not to go to swiss.
It was really boring.
if we woudln't had booked the train ticket, we wouldn't have stayed in swiss.
anyway, we went to the downtown of the Luzern and found a park.
there was a statue which was modeled Pestalozzi who is called the father of education. we took some pictures.
we visited apple shop for the first time
강사 첨삭
A fantastic Friday to you [이름]!
Congratulations! You got a perfect score!
Wow! You impressed me! Keep it up!
I really admire your for continously doing your homework even though you have a hectic schedule.
I am excited to hear a lot of stories from you today!
See you!
Teacher Nina
1. There are 10 houses on our street. Our house is the biggest one.
>> CORRECT! 2. My brother sings better than I do, but I play guitar better than he does.
>> CORRECT! 3. This is the best song I have ever heard!
>> CORRECT! 4. Tom is stronger than I am.
>> CORRECT! 5. Out of all the students in our class, I am the shortest.
>> CORRECT! 6. Everyone says that my sister is better looking than I am.
>> CORRECT! 7. She is the best looking girl in our school.
>> CORRECT! 8. This is boring. Let\'s do something more interesting.
>> CORRECT! 9. This isn\'t the most interesting book I have ever read.
>> CORRECT! 10. Your apartment is cleaner than mine.
>> CORRECT! 11.1.4the itinerary to swiss was interesting, but the journey to swiss was boring.
>> The itinerary to Swiss was interesting, but the journey was boring.it\'s true, I recommend you not to go to swiss.
>> CORRECT! ( Capitalization of word: Swiss^^ )It was really boring.
>> CORRECT! if we woudln\'t had booked the train ticket, we wouldn\'t have stayed in swiss.
>> If we didn\'t book a train ticket, we wouldn\'t have stayed in Swiss.
anyway, we went to the downtown of the Luzern and found a park.
>> Anyway, we went to downtown of Luzern and found a park.
>> OR: We went downtown and we found a park. there was a statue which was modeled Pestalozzi who is called the father of education. we took some pictures.
>> There was a statue of Pestalozzi, who is the father of Education. We took some pictures there.we visited apple shop for the first time
>> We visited an apple shop for the first time.
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