The Korea holiday tradition is disappearing.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two big holiday in Korea.
Korean word is Seolnal and Chuseok.
Seolnal is January first of the lunar calendar.
Chuseok is August fifteenth of the lunar calendar.
It is a holiday that families gather and enjoy the harvest of farming and the beginning of the year.
When I was a child, people wore Hanbok this day.
We rarely wear Hanbok these days.
Also families don\'t get together as well as before.
This year is more so because of the COVID19.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Kate
>>There are two big holidays in Korea.
Korean word is Seolnal and Chuseok.
Korean word is Seolnal and Chuseok.
>>In Korean, we call those holidays \"Seoul\" and \"Chuseok.
Seolnal is January first of the lunar calendar.
Seolnal is January first of the lunar calendar.
>>Seolnal is January first on the lunar calendar.
Chuseok is August fifteenth of the lunar calendar.
Chuseok is August fifteenth of the lunar calendar.
>>Chuseok is August fifteenth on the lunar calendar.
It is a holiday that families gather and enjoy the harvest of farming and the beginning of the year.
It is a holiday that families gather and enjoy the harvest of farming and the beginning of the year.
>>CORRECT!
When I was a child, people wore Hanbok this day.
When I was a child, people wore Hanbok this day.
>>When I was a child, people wore Hanbok on these days.
We rarely wear Hanbok these days.
We rarely wear Hanbok these days.
>>CORRECT!
Also families don\'t get together as well as before.
Also families don\'t get together as well as before.
>>CORRECT!
This year is more so because of the COVID19.
This year is more so because of the COVID19.
>>More so this year because of COVID 19.
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