The Korean Beauty, Hanbok
학생이 쓴 원문
Hanbok is very beauty.
There usually made from silk. It's so soft!
And It has pretty patterns and colors.
When Chusuck&New year, we wear this!(Hanbok)
It is our traditional clothe~!!^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Thank you for writing about the Hanbok, I am sure it really is a Korean beauty. It is very elegant. I hope we can talk some more about it during our next class. Take care!
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Hanbok is very beauty.
>>>The Hanbok is very beautiful.
>>>Hanboks are very beautiful.There usually made from silk.
>>>They are usually made from silk.
It\'s so soft!
>>>CORRECT!And It has pretty patterns and colors.
>>>CORRECT! OR
>>>And it is filled with pretty patterns and colors. OR
>>>They are also filled with pretty patterns and colors.When Chusuck&New year, we wear this!(Hanbok)
>>>We wear Hanbok during special occasions like Chusuck and New Year.It is our traditional clothe~!!^^
>>>It is our traditional clothing.
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