The Korean War was the biggest conflict on the peninsula in the past 100 years.

2020-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is sulnal. Today is saturday. Tomorrow, I will go to church. I drove again today. I am playing home all day long. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework I appreciate it a lot. It\'s good that you have time to practice your writing skills. I\'m happy to read your composition ^_^


Today is sulnal.
>>>Today is Seollal.
OR>>>It\'s Seollal today.
Today is saturday.
>>> Today is Saturday.
OR>>>It\'s Saturday Today.
Tomorrow, I will go to church.
>>>Tomorrow, I will go to church.
OR>>>I will go to the church tomorrow.
I drove again today.
>>>CORRECT!
I am playing home all day long.
>>> I am playing computer at home all day long.

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