The kpop idol’s life
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I think half and half. Because they’ve probably dreamed a lot of fans, passionate stages, and being luxury brand models. But in the behind of that popularity, there must be hard process like losing weight extremely, media attack, rumors. So it’s hard to say that they live the way they’ve wanted.
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I think half and half. Because they’ve probably dreamed a lot of fans, passionate stages, and being luxury brand models.
>> I think it depends because they’ve probably dreamt of having a lot of fans, passionate about performing on big stages and being luxury brand models.
But in the behind of that popularity, there must be hard process like losing weight extremely, media attack, rumors.
>> But behind that popularity, there must be hard processes like losing a lot of weight, media attacks, and rumors.
So it’s hard to say that they live the way they’ve wanted.
>> So, that\'s why it\'s hard to say that it is really the life that they wanted.
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