The language of animals
학생이 쓴 원문
Ever since I was young, I've loved the animal a lot. No matter what kind of animals they are, I love them all. I believe, like people, they have feelings, thoughts and conversations which only animals could understand between themselves. I was very curious about the language of animals in my youth. I thought if I had been able to speak their language, I could have communicated with them and have helped them by representing their situations and positions. For instance, if that had happened, many people could have known how animals have thought about global warming, what they have wanted human to do for them, and so forth. However, I was afraid that it was difficult to find out the way to talk to them. Ond day, when I was watching TV, I found a woman called Animal Communicator. She said that even she would guess the repetitive behavior of the animal rather than actually talking to the animal. If I had been given the opportunity to learn the language of animals, I would have taken it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sending your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
Ever since I was young, I\'ve loved the animal a lot.
>> Ever since I was young, I have loved the animals.
No matter what kind of animals they are, I love them all.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> I love practically every animal on this earth.
I believe, like people, they have feelings, thoughts and conversations which only animals could understand between themselves.
>> I believe, just like humans, they also have feelings, thoughts and conversations which only animals could understand.
I was very curious about the language of animals in my youth.
>> I became curious about the language of the animals in my youth.
I thought if I had been able to speak their language, I could have communicated with them and have helped them by representing their situations and positions.
>> If only I could understand them, I would talk to them and help them. I will use my voice to inform people about their situations and needs.
For instance, if that had happened, many people could have known how animals have thought about global warming, what they have wanted human to do for them, and so forth.
>> If that happens, people would know every animal\'s perception about global warming. They could instruct people what to do and so on.
However, I was afraid that it was difficult to find out the way to talk to them.
>> But I know, this is impossible to happen.
Ond day, when I was watching TV, I found a woman called Animal Communicator.
>> There was this day when I was watching TV, I watched a woman called the \"Animal Communicator\".
She said that even she would guess the repetitive behavior of the animal rather than actually talking to the animal.
>> She said that she could only guess the behavior of the animal by its repetitive actions but not actually talking to them.
If I had been given the opportunity to learn the language of animals, I would have taken it.
>> If I\'m given the opportunity to study the language of the animals, I will certainly grab it.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.