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2011-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

These are my Topic. And.. can you do my favor, vaness ? Actually since I am a korean and I don't know how to speak fluently. So If you do mind could you teach when i stop during readind a snetence ? For example, like this First of all / I would like / to say, Thank you / for giving me / the chance to introduce myself / to you. I am glad / to be here today. My name is [Name] HWANG I am a senior student / at Hankyung university and /my major is Horticulture. I need / ☜ this If you know the important word or a stressed syllable and plese let me know.. Thank you

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Continuation: These are my Topic.>> These are my topics.And.. can you do my favor, vaness ?>> And can you do me a favor, Vaness?Actually since I am a korean and I don't know how to speak fluently. >> Actually, since I'm a Korean, I don't know how to speak fluently.So If you do mind could you teach when i stop during readind a snetence ? >> So if you don't mind, could you teach me when to stop when reading a sentence?For example, like this>> For example:First of all / I would like / to say, Thank you / for giving me / the chance to introduce myself / to you.I am glad / to be here today. My name is [Name] HWANGI am a senior student / at Hankyung university and /my major is Horticulture.>> Correct.I need / ☜ this>> Correct.If you know the important word or a stressed syllable and plese let me know.. >> Please let me know the stressed syllable of important words. Thank you >> Correct.

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