The last cold snap

2011-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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In fact, it wasn't a quarrel with my mom in this morning. It's just that she gave me some advice. But my mom didn't realize that it hurt me. It also let my confidence fade. I don't want to be hurry to get my future job even though I may look a lazy person. My mom is also kind of a pessimist. She thinks that I can't get a job forever if I miss this time. I know what she said so I told her that I need some time to be deliberate. I sometimes feel that how unmatured I am. I believe the worse situation, the worthier goal I can get. I hope this time to be the last cold snap :D

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Mothers will always be like mothers. They nag a lot because they are afraid for us. Sometimes is too much but I guess we have to be more understanding. They mean no harm but just for our good, right? -Tiny^0^ In fact, it wasn't a quarrel with my mom in this morning. >> In fact, it wasn't a quarrel with my mom this morning. It's just that she gave me some advice. >>correctBut my mom didn't realize that it hurt me. >>correctIt also let my confidence fade. >>correctI don't want to be hurry to get my future job even though I may look a lazy person. >> I don't want to hurry to get a future job even though I may look a lazy person. My mom is also kind of a pessimist. >>correctShe thinks that I can't get a job forever if I miss this time. >> She thinks that I can't get a job forever if I miss it this time. I know what she said so I told her that I need some time to be deliberate. >> I know what she said so I told her that I need some time to deliberate. I sometimes feel that how unmatured I am. >>I sometimes feel how immature I am.I believe the worse situation, the worthier goal I can get. >>correctI hope this time to be the last cold snap :D >>correct

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