The last cold snap
학생이 쓴 원문
In fact, it wasn't a quarrel with my mom in this morning.
It's just that she gave me some advice.
But my mom didn't realize that it hurt me.
It also let my confidence fade.
I don't want to be hurry to get my future job even though I may look a lazy person.
My mom is also kind of a pessimist.
She thinks that I can't get a job forever if I miss this time.
I know what she said so I told her that I need some time to be deliberate.
I sometimes feel that how unmatured I am.
I believe the worse situation, the worthier goal I can get.
I hope this time to be the last cold snap :D
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Mothers will always be like mothers.
They nag a lot because they are afraid for us.
Sometimes is too much but I guess we have to be more understanding.
They mean no harm but just for our good, right?
-Tiny^0^
In fact, it wasn't a quarrel with my mom in this morning.
>> In fact, it wasn't a quarrel with my mom this morning.
It's just that she gave me some advice.
>>correctBut my mom didn't realize that it hurt me.
>>correctIt also let my confidence fade.
>>correctI don't want to be hurry to get my future job even though I may look a lazy person.
>> I don't want to hurry to get a future job even though I may look a lazy person.
My mom is also kind of a pessimist.
>>correctShe thinks that I can't get a job forever if I miss this time.
>> She thinks that I can't get a job forever if I miss it this time.
I know what she said so I told her that I need some time to be deliberate.
>> I know what she said so I told her that I need some time to deliberate.
I sometimes feel that how unmatured I am.
>>I sometimes feel how immature I am.I believe the worse situation, the worthier goal I can get.
>>correctI hope this time to be the last cold snap :D
>>correct
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