The last day.

2010-12-31 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

I will have one age after one day. Oh my... I hate not only wrinkle on my face but also my ages. Around this time every year I feel regret for the things of the past. What did I do this year? Did I make an effort? My boyfriend always tell me "Be confident." And I tried so much but I still feel It is not sufficiently complete. So I'll try my best upcoming year. In addition to I will be a great speaker in english. haha A few minutes ago my boyfriend called me "Are you okay with out me?" He might be feel sorry for me. But I am okay because I know how much he loves snowboard riding. I want to respect his desire.^^ Anyway happy new year lei~~!

강사 첨삭

Hi J! It will be another year and we should start it right. Your boyfriend is correct. You should always be confident. We are always here to cheer you on. Have a prosperous New Year J!! Lei J I will have one age after one day. >>I will be a year older after one day. Oh my... >>correct I hate not only wrinkle on my face but also my ages. >>I hate not only the wrinkles on my face but also my age. Around this time every year I feel regret for the things of the past. >>Around this time of year I regret the things that I did in the past. What did I do this year? >>correct Did I make an effort? >>correct My boyfriend always tell me "Be confident." >>correct And I tried so much but I still feel It is not sufficiently complete. >>I tried so hard but still I don't feel satisfied. So I'll try my best this upcoming year. >>correct In addition to I will be a great speaker in english. haha >>correct A few minutes ago my boyfriend called me "Are you okay with out me?" >>A few minutes ago, my boyfriend called and said, will you be okay without me?? He might be feel sorry for me. >>He might be feeling sorry for me. But I am okay because I know how much he loves snowboard riding. >>But it'll okay with me because I know how much he loves snowboarding. I want to respect his desire.^^ >>correct Anyway happy New Year lei~~! >>correct

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