The last day.
학생이 쓴 원문
I will have one age after one day.
Oh my...
I hate not only wrinkle on my face but also my ages.
Around this time every year I feel regret for the things of the past.
What did I do this year?
Did I make an effort?
My boyfriend always tell me "Be confident."
And I tried so much but I still feel It is not sufficiently complete.
So I'll try my best upcoming year.
In addition to I will be a great speaker in english. haha
A few minutes ago my boyfriend called me "Are you okay with out me?"
He might be feel sorry for me.
But I am okay because I know how much he loves snowboard riding.
I want to respect his desire.^^
Anyway happy new year lei~~!
강사 첨삭
Hi J! It will be another year and we should start it right. Your boyfriend is correct. You should always be confident. We are always here to cheer you on. Have a prosperous New Year J!!
Lei J
I will have one age after one day.
>>I will be a year older after one day.
Oh my...
>>correct
I hate not only wrinkle on my face but also my ages.
>>I hate not only the wrinkles on my face but also my age.
Around this time every year I feel regret for the things of the past.
>>Around this time of year I regret the things that I did in the past.
What did I do this year?
>>correct
Did I make an effort?
>>correct
My boyfriend always tell me "Be confident."
>>correct
And I tried so much but I still feel It is not sufficiently complete.
>>I tried so hard but still I don't feel satisfied.
So I'll try my best this upcoming year.
>>correct
In addition to I will be a great speaker in english. haha
>>correct
A few minutes ago my boyfriend called me "Are you okay with out me?"
>>A few minutes ago, my boyfriend called and said, will you be okay without me??
He might be feel sorry for me.
>>He might be feeling sorry for me.
But I am okay because I know how much he loves snowboard riding.
>>But it'll okay with me because I know how much he loves snowboarding.
I want to respect his desire.^^
>>correct
Anyway happy New Year lei~~!
>>correct
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