The last day of 2010
학생이 쓴 원문
Todaya is the last day of 2010. Now I have only 7 hours and 10minutes to spend in 2010. I think time goes too fast. especially this year. However, I think I didn't do a great job this year. So, I should do a great job next year. Next year is for rabbits!1 Yeppe! because I'm rabbit. There is the Chinese zodiac sign and this year is for rabbits! I hope I have good luck or have great achievements this year. There was a race of 12 animals going to heaven first. 1st was rate, 2nd cow 3rd tiger 4th rabbit 5th dragon 6th snake 7th hourse 8th sheep 9th monkey 10th rooster 11th dog 12th dog. Do you know your Chinese zodiac sign? If you know please tell me later.
Happy new year RJ teacher~! *^^*
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey!
Happy new year to you too Joey! Yeah, I feel the same way. I feel like I didn't do much of a good job this year, but the good news is we can always start over in 2011. I heard next year is the year of the rabbit. In my case, my Chinese zodiac sign is monkey. Talk to you later.
Todaya is the last day of 2010. Now I have only 7 hours and 10minutes to spend in 2010.
>>Today is the last day of 2010. I only have 7 hours and 10 minutes left to spend in 2010.
I think time goes too fast. especially this year.
>>I think time goes by too fast, especially in this year.
However, I think I didn't do a great job this year. So, I should do a great job next year.
>>correct
Next year is for rabbits!1 Yeppe! because I'm rabbit. There is the Chinese zodiac sign and this year is for rabbits!
>>correct
I hope I have good luck or have great achievements this year.
>>correct
There was a race of 12 animals going to heaven first.
>>There was a race of 12 animals going to heaven.
1st was rate, 2nd cow 3rd tiger 4th rabbit 5th dragon 6th snake 7th hourse 8th sheep 9th monkey 10th rooster 11th dog 12th dog.
>>1st was rate, 2nd cow, 3rd tiger, 4th rabbit, 5th dragon, 6th snake, 7th horse, 8th sheep, 9th monkey, 10th rooster, 11th dog and 12th dog.
Do you know your Chinese zodiac sign? If you know please tell me later.
>>correct
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