The last time I gave a hand to someone
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You are both fortunate to be friends, [이름]! I am grateful that you could right your thoughts understandably! -Faith-
Because of the pandemic, I don\'t have enough opportunities to give a hand to others.
>> CORRECT
I really try to recall the moment I helped someone.
>> CORRECT
OR: I want to recollect the time when I offered my help to someone.
I and my friend decided to take a computer license which gives additional points when we get a job.
>> My friend and I decided to get a computer license which gives additional points when we look for a job.
It\'s really hard to register to take a test because a lot of people want to take the test.
>> It\'s really hard to register to take a test because a lot of people want to take it.
However, my friend couldn\'t apply it because she had to go to give a private lesson.
>> However, my friend couldn\'t apply it because she had to give someone a private lesson.
Therefore, I tried to register for the test instead of her.
>> CORRECT
OR: Therefore, I tried to register her myself.
It was small help, but she appreciated me.
>> It was a small help, but she appreciated me.
She always helps me in a variety of ways, so it was a chance to repay her kindness!
>> She always helps me in a variety of ways, so it was my chance to repay her kindness!
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