The latest trend
학생이 쓴 원문
Our country’s trend is called “God SSeng”
It means life of god or living like a god.
Let me explained it.
People plan their work something to do during a day.
Like doing exercise, getting up early and reading books.
It’s not a great goal.
They are trying to accomplsh their goal.
They want to concentrate themselves.
When they finish their goal.
They feel satisfied and they say
“Lived God SSeng”
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
Thank you for giving an explanation to this. I do appreciate and I understand it better :)
Aki~
Aki~
Our country’s trend is called “God SSeng”
>>> CORRECT!
It means life of god or living like a god.
>>> It means a life of god or living like a god.
Let me explained it.
>>> Let me explain it.
People plan their work something to do during a day.
>>> People plan their work for something to do during the day.
Like doing exercise, getting up early, and reading books.
>>> CORRECT!
It’s not a great goal.
>>> CORRECT!!
They are trying to accomplish their goal.
>>> CORRECT!
They want to concentrate themselves.
>>> They want to concentrate on themselves.
When they finish their goal. They feel satisfied and they say “Lived God SSeng”
>>> CORRECT!
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