The lesson in conflict

2023-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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I\'ve cut off relationship with a friend who is familiar with me in high school. Since the time is going after the event, I don\'t remember the exact cause of conflict. But, It was related to rude expressions. 1 years later, my friend contacted me to meet and talk about the issue. The relationship was fastly recovered as we talk with objective perspective. I learned that if I want to resolve a conflict, I should contact a person first.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Yu [이름]!

Your hard work will surely pay off!

-Hanna ^^

I\'ve cut off relationship with a friend who is familiar with me in high school.

>>I ended a relationship with a friend from high school.

Since the time is going after the event, I don\'t remember the exact cause of conflict. 

>>With time passing, I no longer remember the exact cause of the conflict

But, It was related to rude expressions. 

>>Correct.

1 years later, my friend contacted me to meet and talk about the issue. 

>>A year later, my friend reached out to me, suggesting we meet and discuss the issue.

The relationship was fastly recovered as we talk with objective perspective.

>>As we engaged in a conversation with an objective perspective, our relationship was quickly restored.
I learned that if I want to resolve a conflict, I should contact a person first.

>>From this experience, I learned that to resolve a conflict, it is important to take the initiative and reach out to the person involved.

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