The life without books.
학생이 쓴 원문
Books are very important to me. Because I value enjoying my hobbies, and reading books is one of my hobbies. A life without books will be difficult because it is difficult to study and a life without hobbies.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Books are very important to me.
>>> CORRECT!
Because I value enjoying my hobbies, and reading books is one of my hobbies.
>>> Because I value enjoying my hobbies, and reading books are one of them.
A life without books will be difficult because it is difficult to study and a life without hobbies.
>>> CORRECT!
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