The Little Mermaid.
학생이 쓴 원문
Long long time ago, the little mermaid lived deep inside the sea. Her name was Eva. She had 5 sisters. She was a princess also, she was the youngest.She wants to see outside sea.
One night , she saw people were singing and dancing. She was so happy to see human.
She asked the witch, I want to human leg, then she gave to her voice the witch and she got human leg.She met the prince who invited his palace. It was huge and beautiful palace.
Before the witch told her, if you not marry him you gonna bubble. Her sister told her when prince got sleep that time you kill him. They gave to her very sharp knife. Little mermaid didn’t kill him. Prince married someone after she jumped the sea immediately , she c[이름]ged the bubble. It was a sad story but little mermaid was so kind and got warm heart.
1. On the beautiful lake.
2.in a busy area.
3. on a public stage.
4. onto the dirty street.
5.during the championship tournament.
6.between the canned goods.
7.in the afternoon.
강사 첨삭
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- Teacher Debbie
>> Long time ago, there was a little mermaid who lives deep in the sea.
Her name was Eva.
>> correct
She had 5 sisters.
>> correct
She was a princess also, she was the youngest.
>> She was the youngest among all the princesses.
She wants to see outside sea.
>> She wanted to see outside the sea.
One night , she saw people were singing and dancing.
One night , she saw people were singing and dancing.
>> One night, she saw a bunch of people that were singing and dancing.
She was so happy to see human.
>> She was so happy to see humans.
She asked the witch, I want to human leg, then she gave to her voice the witch and she got human leg.
She asked the witch, I want to human leg, then she gave to her voice the witch and she got human leg.
>> She asked the witch \"I want a human leg.\"
>> So she gave her voice to the witch in exc[이름]ge to human legs.
She met the prince who invited his palace.
>> She met the prince who invited her to his palace.
It was huge and beautiful palace.
>> It was a huge and beautiful palace.
Before the witch told her, if you not marry him you gonna bubble.
Before the witch told her, if you not marry him you gonna bubble.
>> The witch told her that if she will not marry the prince, she will turn into a bubble.
Her sister told her when prince got sleep that time you kill him.
>> Her sister told her to kill the prince in his sleep.
They gave to her very sharp knife.
>> They gave her a sharp knife.
Little mermaid didn’t kill him.
>> The little mermaid didn\'t kill him.
Prince married someone after she jumped the sea immediately , she c[이름]ged the bubble.
>> The prince married a different woman.
>> After that, she jumped into the sea and c[이름]ged into a bubble.
It was a sad story but little mermaid was so kind and got warm heart.
>> correct
1. On the beautiful lake.
>> correct
2.in a busy area.
2.in a busy area.
>> correct
3. on a public stage.
3. on a public stage.
>> correct
4. onto the dirty street.
4. onto the dirty street.
>> correct
5.during the championship tournament.
5.during the championship tournament.
>> correct
6.between the canned goods.
6.between the canned goods.
>> correct
7.in the afternoon.
7.in the afternoon.
>> correct
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