the longest place that I evever been was..

2014-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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of course, Europe. 11.1.6. We fell asleep last night with locking door. The host would come to this place, so I need to set arlam clock. As I hear the alram bell, I got up and unlocked the door. The host came to us and she made us Mandu. I was shamed that we thought she might sell us to mafia. Anyway, We started to go to the park of Michelangelo by bus. It was rainny day. sometimes we had to skip our schedule because of the weather, So we were worried about if there were a limitation for our tour. Fortunately, the rain stopped soon. On the way to the park, we found David statue and took a photo. the place existing David statue was high ground, so we could look down town. With light fog, Sunshine made the village beautiful. The next destination was Pitii castle, Named from pitii familly. We didn't care because we didn't have any idea about pitii familly. but the sound of pitti is exactly same with P.T which means Physical Training in Korea, so we took a pose seemed like we were traini

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Hello there, It was nice of you to write an essay about your experiences in Europe. I know that these are wonderful memories of yours. I do encourage you to have the passion in learning English because with passion, you\'ll enjoy the process of learning. Have a nice day!!!! T. Nina^^   of course, Europe. >> Of course, it was my trip in Europe.   11.1.6. We fell asleep last night with locking door. >> We fell asleep last night without locking the door. The host would come to this place, so I need to set arlam clock. >> The host might come to this place, so I need to set the alarm clock. As I hear the alram bell, I got up and unlocked the door. >> As I heard the alarm, I got up and saw the door unlocked. The host came to us and she made us Mandu. >> The host came and made Mandu. I was shamed that we thought she might sell us to mafia. >> I felt ashamed because we thought she\'ll do something bad to us.^^ Anyway, We started to go to the park of Michelangelo by bus. >> Anyway, we went to Michaelangelo park by bus. It was rainny day. >> It was a rainy day. >> It was raining at that time. sometimes we had to skip our schedule because of the weather, >> So, we have to sometimes skip our schedule because of the weather. So we were worried about if there were a limitation for our tour. >> We were worried about if they will limit the time of our tour. Fortunately, the rain stopped soon. >> Fortunately, the rain stopped. On the way to the park, we found David statue and took a photo. >> On the way to the park, we saw David\'s statue and took some photos.  the place existing David statue was high ground, so we could look down town. >> The statue of David is located in a high ground, so we can see the view of the downtown. With light fog, Sunshine made the village beautiful. >> The sunshine made the village beautiful with the fog light. The next destination was Pitii castle, Named from pitii familly. >> The next destination was Pitii Castle, named after the Pitii family. We didn\'t care because we didn\'t have any idea about pitii familly. >> We didn\'t care because we don\'t know anything about the Pitii family. but the sound of pitti is exactly same with P.T which means Physical Training in Korea, so we took a pose seemed like we were traini >> It sounds like Physical Training, so we took a pose seemed like we were having a training. ^^

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