The matter of capital punishment.
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The matter of capital punishment has been disputing for a long time.
There are cons and pros. The both of those have reasons and that's acceptable too.
Actually, Korea is regarded as a non capital punishment country because it hasn't been conducted over 10 years.
You know what "We are as fickle as a reed." If they had a family who are killed by murderer they would have changed to pro.
I'm sure that victim's family suffering more than murderer or their family. If they knew that the murderer live in at a prison safely, which would be more suffering things. In conclusion, I'm pro at capital punishment.
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The matter of capital punishment.
>>Correct
The matter of capital punishment has been disputing for a long time.
>>correctThere are cons and pros.
>>correct
The both of those have reasons and that's acceptable too.
>>Both of these have reason and these are acceptable too.Actually, Korea is regarded as a non capital punishment country because it hasn't been conducted over 10 years.
>>Actually, Korea is regarded as a non-capital punishment country because it hasn’t conducted it for over 10 years.You know what "We are as fickle as a reed."
>>You know what? “We are as fickle as a reed.”
If they had a family who are killed by murderer they would have changed to pro.
>>If they had a family member who is killed by a murderer, they would have to be changed to pro.I'm sure that victim's family suffering more than murderer or their family.
>>I’m sure that the victim’s family is suffering more than the murderer and his family.
If they knew that the murderer live in at a prison safely, which would be more suffering things.
>>If they knew that the murderer is living in a prison safely, which would be more cruel?
In conclusion, I'm pro at capital punishment.
>>In conclusion,I agree to capital punishment.
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